Lost In The Bush

This story was kind of confusing. I felt like I was reading two stories at once with Chuck's essay then all of the footnotes. It would of been better if Chuck's essay was put togther all at the beginning then to put all the footnotes together as if they were a story themself. Other than going back and forth between the essay and footnotes, half of the footnotes were information that as the reader I didn't need to know to understand what was going on in the essay. Relating to the kind of talk that went on in the kitchen in the story was eassy. I work at resturant and I am well aware of what the servers talk about specially the guys. The majority of this story was just talking about girls and sexual things which made me want to stop reading the story. It was unessary and irrellavant. The story didn't really have point to it. The essay alone didn't have point to it. Like it said in the footnotes the essay didn't follow the guidelines of the assignment at all.